Wednesday 23 November 2011

The Gunners Make It (Creative Writing Workshop Prompt)

Quickly he ran to get the ball passed too him.  Though the ball gone wide from his feet which his comrade passed it wrongly, he, the unsung hero with his speed which he knew well that he will never be able to reach to the ball before another man who was in yellow got it, ran with passion and zealous force to the ball and managed to get the ball. The Cameroon took his spirit to another level.  He was a completely different man last night. Some know he is so well in his field, and some even say he is the best man in his area, but he always let himself be under the seasons, perhaps last time it was summer, then it swiftly changed to autumn, then slowly wintering himself and last night, that was SPRING!!!  He went through few men in yellow with the ball like sticking to his feet.  They yellows, which some say those men which he gone through are the remained Nazis, who really great in assaulting, and blatantly great in defending, where from August till now, they still held their crown high.  The men in yellow, the remained Nazis, people called them the Dortmund, and the man who ran with the ball, with his team in red as he was also in red, glamorous red with FredPerry-like leaves on the crest, people named them the Gunners,sometime the White Army, and sometime the Crisis. The unsung hero, they called him the Sidekick to the Robin-who-now-doesn’t-need-Batman. After passed through the yellows, he projectiled the ball beautifully to Robin and Robin headed the ball into the goal, and Robin scored the first goal!!! “Really nice dribbling by Song, and Van the Man is very Vantastic, he scored, AGAIN.” And they played the whole game very well and managed to get through UEFA Champion League.  Alexander Dmitri Song Billong, Man of The Match.

1 comment:

  1. well hello there kyde..it is nice to see producing quite a good paragraph.
    here is what i would wish to comment on your writing.
    for academic writing, you are not using the proper language, it was like an everyday used type of language.
    regarding your style..i love it very much. it break a new dawn. a new form of writing and i love it when you put my name there..raden van persie and robin van persie..it sound alike..:)
    somehow,i would say that is is based on true story..
    and for your writing..i must say i like it..and i am loking forward for your next entry...

    long live Arsenal..

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